A Small Tweak

In my last post, I showed the piece I made for the current NTAQ design challenge.  And I mentioned that the thin line in the left border really bothered me.  In fact the more I looked at the piece, the more it bothered me. 
BEFORE:  Do you see the thin line?  I apparently was trying to hide it......
So I changed it.  I think it's an improvement.
AFTER:  More balanced.  And certainly looks more intentional.
What do you think?

Comments

Julierose said…
It is a big improvement--before it looked like a mistake (to me anyway, but what do I know??hahaha) I like the bigger wedge piece a whole lot more...
this such a nice piece hugs, Julierose
Pat Hanna said…
It's definitely a stronger and more balanced composition now. Like it.
Your fix really made a world of difference.